2013년 1월 11일 금요일

Ode

Dear my EOP Paper,
How are you my dear friend. Nice to meet you.
I get to know you since I came to GLPS in KMLA.
At fist I wasn't really close with you.

But I heard some rumors that you make many students get in trouble.
And finally Iast weekend,I met you.
You didn't seem to be a hard person when I met you.

But when I talked with you
How dare you make me frustrating
How dare you make me confusing
And I just found out why you hate me so much

You show up any time I speak Korean in GLPS.
Why are you making me so embarrassing
Why are you making me so crazy.
I shall never meet you ever again.

댓글 2개:

  1. Ahhyun,

    This is a good ode but you should add some metaphors to it and also add some pictures to your post. Keep working hard!

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  2. Hi!
    This is a well-written ode, but you have to use more metaphors in your ode. Also, try to make good use of pictures to make your post more interesting. Keep working hard~

    -Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)

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